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» Poem: Just shut the fuck up
Just shut the fuck up
written by TAINTEDSOULisBACK
07:44 AM 12/4/04
Goth, punk, wigger, hick
are four words that make me sick
emo, prep, skank, nerd,
you use ignorance for your voice to be heard
label, label, label, label.
you need something else to do
you need to crawl out of your cradle
and walk in big kid shoes
Hurry little kids and put up your razor blades
Gothic is a building design
and punk comes in ONE shade
Good Charlotte and Simple Plan
are bubble gum rock
And Amy Lee isn't "Gothic",
she's angsty pop,
And all of you listen
closely to me
in a year or two,
what will this all mean?
It won't mean shit
and if you'd just admit it,
you might not look like such an idiot
"Oh, I'm so emo,"
"I'm so punk,"
I'm so gothic,"
just shut the fuck up!
You are you
get over it
'cuz you can't ever change that!
Whether you're nothing or "all that"
wearing pink or black
skating or reading
or mopping blood off the sink
nothing will change the fact that you're you
so quit fucking complaining
it's something you gotta get used to.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I am so fucking disgusted with my generation. If I hear one more teen say they are emo, I am going to fucking rip my hair out. Emo is basically sad ass rock music. But I guess you couldn't call your followers sad asses.

AND ALL OF YOU LITTLE SIMPLE PLAN AND GOOD CHARLOTTE FANS LISTEN UP!!!!! THEY ARE NOT FUCKING PUNK!!! PUNK DIED A LONG TIME AGO.

I can't say much about the goths because I get labeled that. But at least I have sense enough to know I'm not.

Please, TO THE NEW GENERATION... GROW SOME FUCKING BALLS AND BE YOURSELF!#@$!

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» Comments / Feedback
by maledeth (12-4-2004 - 07:46 AM)
I'd bow my head a bit to a person like you......right fucking on! Many people should listen to your comment.

by HellHeim (12-4-2004 - 08:00 AM)
I thought it was honest and to the point. in other words, I fuckin love it!

by xX_katie_Xx (12-4-2004 - 09:43 AM)
That's a great fucking poem! So true. What has this world come to?

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