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Feelings(comment please)
written by WildCatHD06:43 PM 12/4/04I really don't care what people think
Put your feet in my shoes
People living to talk, place no values on material things
Lifes a material thing
Take it and i wont even care
Give it away, or if it stays, i don't think i'll care
Reading poems on kids who conspire to commit suicide
But before they die, they write another line
It's the deepest, the best line from their mind
Open up the mind of a madman
Read it like a storybook
They very notation of a madman can get you hooked
Wrote these lines to bring my peotic side justice
Atomics in my blood and my life has become a circus
No idea tamers, my ideas are running wild in my mind
Can get my thoughts together
Dreams that have been realized are taking over my soul
And i think i see holes in my fingers
They don't cause pain, but no pain can still be lethal
Lips chapped, eyes bloodshot as again a fade away
Fade into the abyss of lost souls, who has taken me
Wanna be saved, but can't commit my life to anything |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by dark_love_angel (12-4-2004 - 06:48 PM)
| hi... that is really deep man... you should like u2u me and we can talk... |
by gravi01 (12-4-2004 - 06:48 PM)
| umm....not bad....but not good.... |
by punkrock101 (12-4-2004 - 06:50 PM)
| that was good! i relate to that one!! keep writting! |
by bitter (12-4-2004 - 06:53 PM)
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