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Girl-man-thing
written by Trapezium07:46 PM 12/4/04| IT is at it again, commenting on my poetry. Calling me fat, calling me a slut. Can't you find something new to me? You're like a broken record. Death's label, the girl-man-thing, the shit in a band that can't even sing. I know I'm fat, but I don't care. Just 'cause we can't help it to point and stare - at your fat ass. You think you're good, when you skive a class. It's nothing new, my great grandma done it, too! Pathetic little words from "suicide's survivor". Who's alive? Her. Why prove how immature you are with your short words and spelling mistakes. Go eat some more ice-cream cakes. Kill yourself again, it's what I'd do. I would so despise being you. Animosity towards you, You'd turn in your grave if you really were dead. Damn girl you're a little messed up in the head. When I say a little, I mean really bad, but in the best possible way. Come kill me another day. Use them plane tickets to England, find out where I reside. I'll be waiting for you, I wont hide. I forgot, you won't appear. You're dead, aren't you? Is your ghost going to attack me? Is it true? I thought you loved me, aww poor little baby. Benign, pathetic, for a girl that has no freinds your freindship with some people seems to never end. Cuss me as much as you want, you'll just make me laugh. Tell em to walk in the middle of a road and I'll lay on the path. Just to mock your lack of authority. To mock your placidity and your aggresive passivity. Bleed and live in sentimental poverty, Feed of the destruction of creativity - flowing through my veins. Laugh at your contradictive ex-christian ways. Am I living in a theatrical play. It feels like it, with the overacted drame and subliminal fake. Oh sorry, my mistake. It's all real to you isn't it? Condemnation, damnation, repetitive aggression. Survivor of the girl-man-thing. |
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Just for you, Alex.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by i_love_sandy (12-4-2004 - 08:27 PM)
| you comment on my poetry way more and alot worse i did all that for payback. how about you leave me alone, never talk to me, never think of me never comment just leave me alone you fucking ass whole. thats all you are a fat slut with nothing better to do than to feel sorry for yourself well i dont care i hope you die soon! go fuckin kill yourself please i hate you so much! go go now hang yourself die and burn in hell! no-one likes you! |
by Living_hurts (12-4-2004 - 08:57 PM)
| Hun, that was a great poem, sounds like you got a lot off your chest. And to Alex, just because YOU may not like him, doesn't mean that everyone else doesn't either. You know as well as I do that he isn't fat, hes not a slut, hes a real person, with real feelings, and definately doesn't need you giving him a hard time. *shrug* Anyway, good poem, i liked it =) ~xXx~ |
by Trapezium (12-4-2004 - 08:59 PM)
| Payback - how immature. How about no? tut. Bad grammar, bad spellings and an overused, short vocabulary. Not the way to go about flaming people. It's Asshole, not ass whole. You keep telling yourself that, of course I'm a fat slut aren't I? Maybe it;d be better if you made a judgement when you've actually seen me. Sorry, dead people can't see. I don't feel sorry for myself actually, I pity you for your pathetic behavioural problems. I don't want to die, and I'd never do such a thing just for you. You're lucky I waste my time by commenting on your poetry and replying to your amusing comments. Tell me, how can you hate someone you don't really know. You know next to nothing about me, yet you claim to feel such loathing for me. Why would I want to hang myself, when I could hang my dad instead? How could I get to burn in such a place that doesn't exist? "No one likes you" That's a funny phrase really. Just because I'm "goth" doesn't stop me from being extremely popular in school, in other schools, out of school and practically everywhere I go. People know me because I'm different. "Such individuality is a beauty in someone so young." That's someone else talkign about me, not even a freind. I'm in the biggest "crew" of the city, yet you still say no one likes me. |
by i_love_sandy (12-5-2004 - 01:41 AM)
| ppl know you because your in the world records book for most sucky stupid crappy people! popularity sux. which makes you suck even more you prep your not goth. you hurt me so freakin bad i'll never forgive you. this is me paying YOU back. i never did crap exept love you |
by i_love_sandy (12-5-2004 - 01:44 AM)
| oh yeah i'm not fat i'm phat i weigh 93 pounds you call that fat? i make spelling mistakes cuz i dont care and who does care anyway. please just go die |
by i_love_sandy (12-5-2004 - 01:49 AM)
| if u dont want to die then stop saying you do stop lying about things that happen to u stop lying about commiting suicide! your the attention seeking one. who cares if i use a short vocabulary i keep it real and atleast ppl understand what i'm trying to say no i'm not lucky you reply to this and not lucky you comment on my poetry. yeah think twice about telling me to die mkay now you better not speak another word to me. i am in england right now. screw you fatass |
by Trapezium (12-5-2004 - 12:04 PM)
| Guinness wouldn't be so immature as to have such a record exist. Popularity doesn't suck. It can help you a lot. Tell me, if you surviuve until then, when you get a business and no one knows about it, compared to having a business that everyone knows. Which one's going to do better.?Prep, we have a high school prepatory school in this city, I'm in a school that takes on all of the people in the county that have been excluded. I know I'm not a goth, I've never stated I am, but if I was in a stereotypical category, I'd fit more into goth then anything. Tell me, do you know any prep that's not in mainstream school? Didn't think so. I'm not a prep, never have been, neither am I goth, but I'm more so a goth than a prep. You never loved me, you didn't even know me. Why use "Gangsta slang" to me. We all know it just shows how ridiculous you are. People make spelling mistakes because they're not intelligent, not because they don't care. Typos are a different matter. Who cares? Interviewees. You try and get a job and you walk in to an interview with a wrongly spelt CV and you're fucked right up. I don't want to die. So why would an insignificant little girl's words mean that much. Ask everyone on here if I say I want to die. I talk about dying, but I don't say how I want to die. I say I want to see my freinds, but I don't say I will. Pay more attention instead of trying to get attention. I don't lie about things that happen to me. I try my hardest not to lie, but yeah, sometime sI do. I NEVER lie about things that have happened to me though. Poetry comes from the heart. That's why mine is so good. I don't lie in my poetry, it's ALL form the heart. I think you're talkign to yourself now. I've never told anyone I've committed suicide, I've enevr told anyone I've tried unless it's true. Unlike you, the little dead girl. HELL YEAH. The little girl has something right for once. Fuck of course I want attention. If I do something, I'll make it known, if I jump off a bridge I'll wait until the fucking media get there. I love attention that's why I'm such a "rebel". You "keep it real" do you? That'll look good when you try getting a job. Intelligent people understand what I say, if they don't - then they need to learn more. You are lucky, 'cause knowing you, the attention seeking bitch - you'd get annoyed and you'd try even harder to proke a reaction. No one tells me what to do, especially not a girl-man-thing. I'll speak to you if I feel like it. It makes me laugh. Whoa, you're in England? You mean with one plane ticket you got momo, momo's freind, chris, AND yourself to England. Fucking hell security's tight these days! |
by Genocide Reaper (12-7-2004 - 01:56 PM)
| ..I would laugh excessivily, but I am in no mood. For I have came to the conclusion. Hate, and Love. Dissolve within my being to become Numbness. If I so see fit... But in any event... I can't believe I took the time to read all of that.. Holy God Fuck. Note.. I have copyrighted the use of 'God Fuck'... But Kahno can use it xD After that Ass shredding POEM! THAT JUST RIPPED ALEX A NEW ASS-HOLE!!! YEAH! Damn man, it was beautiful... And what do you mean Alex? Nobody likes him? I think Kahno is a fucking master poet, and I think you envy him... Hell, I do a slight bit.. Iv got the quanity down, but not the quality... Not what I would like to acheive. Another thing Alex.... Morbid Angel likes his art, I do, and several other people! SO YOU CAN EAT YOUR LOVE FILLED HEART OUT! Oh wait...I forgot, Puppy love isn't real love... Look, I would advice you to...Get into Culture, not Rap.. Gangsta shit is just a way to act like an Ignorant monkey. A reason society is so FUCKED UP! I might say.. Yo, but that wasn't invented by some Hip Hopper. Its another Language. Alex.. I seriously suggest Culture... Either act like a blue blood.. Or find some sort of religion, or Hell, make your own.. To help Kill the Pop-culture, and the Christianity inside your mind. |
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