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Twizted Picture
written by punk_rock_angel66612:53 AM 12/5/04Im going to draw a picture...
A picture with a twist.
Ill draw it with a razor
ill draw it on my wrist
soon the blood will rise, a crymson river down my arm will flow
Soon ill break down and cry the pain causes the "real me" to show
Im not as strong as i pretend to be
now i hurt myself because you have hurt me
Know that things arent alwayz what they seem
On the outside i smile...
while on the inside i SCREAM!!!!! |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I hope you like my poem... i think it sux though i know i can't write poetry but some of my friends told me it waz good and i didnt B-lieve them i wanted to get proof that it sux... (lol)
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| » Comments / Feedback | by SlitMyThroat (12-5-2004 - 01:03 AM)
| ok the first part of ur poem has been used to much! lol other than that its pretty good |
by (guest) (2-14-2005 - 08:10 AM)
| it was really good. It made me think of myself and how others see me. I think I suck at writing poems but your poems are real. They're beautiful because they come from the heart. |
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