» Poem: cutting with yellow roses |
cutting with yellow roses
written by lnlyqckyrckr2706:04 AM 12/5/04my mind is so unclear
can you help me figure out why
i need you to be here
please dont let me cry
theres so much stuff ive been through
why dont you just do your part
theres so much stuff i want to undo
just tend my problems by giving me your heart
with these bright yellow roses im cutting my wrist
and this crimson color comes from below my fist |
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» Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (12-5-2004 - 02:21 PM)
by outofmymind (12-5-2004 - 05:31 PM)
by woteva_girl0405 (12-7-2004 - 09:37 PM)
wow. really poetic. i wd never have thought of this |
by black crow (12-8-2004 - 08:51 AM)
very very good. i know the feeling also *claps hands* welldone! |
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