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Destiny-comment- unsure on title
written by Sugar_N_Spikes12:35 PM 12/6/04Sat here looking at the screen
Pictures in my head about all iv'e seen.
The words that iv'e read,
What does it all mean?
It it somehow linked
like fate?
Destiny to read what ive'read
To be who i am,
The girl curled in bed
With dark thoughts and depression
Is this who i am ment to be?
Is this whats ment for me?
Have i learnt to feel this,
to cope like this?
Why?
Why me?
Is it as simple as Destiny? |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Firequeen (12-6-2004 - 12:41 PM)
| I really like ur poem, ur whondering about the same things as I do, fate, destony... is it all meant to be?
U should title it though. |
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