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» Poem: `!&*-Falling-*&!`
`!&*-Falling-*&!`
written by Neva_Feel_Me_Here
04:48 AM 12/7/04
Falling once,

Falling twice,

Why do i keep on falling?

Tried to get past the point where i needed someone to lean on,
Just ended up capsizing,
Flooded my world with tears of guilt,
Shouldn't of been me who had to blame themselves.


Falling all over again once i thought i had won at last,


Turned out i lost.

I got punished for nothing at all,
Was the problem that i was born?,
I needed to have someone to talk too,
But everytime i went for help they just ran away,
Now it's just to late.

Sleeping at night watching shadows on my walls,

Trying to keep myself from falling any further.

To late to help,
I've already fallen,
To late and try to save me,
Breathing in whispers now;i can barely breath,
Just keep falling again.

Falling underneath the surface,

It to late now i'm out of sight..............................................................


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
different aproach to my poem needs fixing does it?

im going to fix the whole thing up dont worry

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