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endless sleep
written by melons06:43 PM 12/7/04Sleeping this endless sleep,
I’m falling way too deep,
Just how deep does the rabbit hole go?
I’m drifting, falling down slow
My eyes cannot awake,
I can’t have my cake,
And eat it all,
I remember standing,
Next I fall
Sleeping this endless sleep,
I’m falling way too deep,
Theirs nothing to miss
Not even my kiss
Alas I hit the concrete
I admit defeat
I am and was nothing
They thought I was bluffing
Sleeping this endless sleep,
I will never see day
I will always see night
My soul is yours to keep |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
its not very good not very flowing its true what it sayd im nothing alot of people tell me
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (12-7-2004 - 06:47 PM)
| this comment is from toria. ( just so u no licy) I fink all uyr poems are brill. luv ya! |
by Trapezium (12-7-2004 - 06:51 PM)
| Screw your weight and eat your cake! You look bloody lovely the way you are! |
by arnie (12-8-2004 - 11:14 AM)
| nice poem babe love u baby, and u can have ur cake if i have a lil :P hehe.
lay off sandy |
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