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» Poem: hopeless soul
hopeless soul
written by devilchild01
07:25 PM 12/7/04
Leave me alone you can’t help me now.
Love has gone and left me.
When he said he would always be there for me.
Hope has left my soul.
My body now nearly dead.
The wind blows through my long curly hair,
my arms are outstretched as far as they can go,
Trying to reach the ends of the world.
Crystal tears stream down my face
From glazed eyes, I see nothing but
Now life will be like if I stay here
Cold, alone and full of pain.
It's cold and dark out on the tower tonight and im all by myself.
Here I stand on the edge.
Waiting for you to come save me tonight
Wanting you to hold me tight
Needing you to keep me away from the edge.
Stop me going towards the light.
Stop me being left in the darkness.
Bring me back to you. I love you.
Snow falls slowly down from heaven
And lands on this planet, left to its destruction
Beautifully white so pure and untouched
Ends it short life without a trace left.
One step takes me flying through the air
Everything that happened in my life
Shows in my mind.
Thoughts and feeling run through my head
Again and again till I get to the last thing I saw
Your smiling face looks up at me as I hit the ground


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» Comments / Feedback
by blood_fang (12-7-2004 - 07:31 PM)
its good.

by bitter (12-7-2004 - 07:33 PM)
A very, very good poem...

by bitter (12-7-2004 - 07:34 PM)
It kinda brings back memories... Both good and bad ones...

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