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Mirror of dreams
written by wiltedrose11:10 PM 12/7/04Look in the mirror of dreams
What do you see?
Are you everthing
You wanted to be?
Hane you helped out a friend?
Givin good advice?
Accomplished a goal?
Changed someones life?
Learn a lesson here
And learn it well
The happiest person would look
And only see themselves |
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The mirror never lies
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (1-23-2005 - 10:02 PM)
| This is very good, it really makes me think, good job! I'm sure you meant "HaVe you...?" though. I liked your piece "Home" too, but I couldn't comment there, It's a real good Haiku/Senryu, but it's very sad. It made me think of the song "Luka" by Suzanne Vega.
http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/suzannevega/luka.html
Hang in there, listen to lots of good music through your headphones, it'll tide you over till you meet your future friends, and can live on your own if you want. You might like and find helpful my "Haiku You Too" http://allpoetry.com/Poem/276100 , and the comments and the links. :)
Also, you're very good, don't ever apologize for your writing, (humble is cool though) most people don't write anything at all mostly ever. :)
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by (guest) (1-30-2005 - 10:38 PM)
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