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» Poem: Final Promise
Final Promise
written by Fallen Beauty
03:15 AM 12/8/04
I hate you -
You don't ask.
You make me do stuff I don't want to.
I hate you.

Get out of my life -
I don't need you.
You're not wanted here.
Get out of my life.

You wonder why I cut -
It's all your fault.
You made me this way.
You wonder why I cut.

Let me die,
Then I'll be happy.
You make me wanna KILL.
Let me die.

I'd rather be dead than with you.
You ruin my life.
You must hate me, too.
I'd rather be dead than with you.

You made me ugly.
Stupid, fat, rebellious, depressed.
Why do you do this?!
You made me fuckin ugly!

Just let me finish -
Stop interrupting to criticize.
Stop making ME stop.
Just let me finish.

If I cut again I promise to kill myself.
I can't stand you anymore,
I can't let you find out.
If I cut again I promise to kill myself.

...I promise to kill myself...


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I have spent so much time thinking about this poem and the seriousness of it... and yet I still think the last line is way too true...

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