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Bloodstain
written by Fallen Beauty
03:19 AM 12/8/04
She was just so down,
So dark and depressed;
Now she's on the ground,
She was feeling too stressed.

And there lies her heart
Shattered to tiny bits
It changed from the start
From smiles to crying fits.

And there lies her blood,
As a crimson pool,
Just enough to flood
Everything that was cruel.

And there lay the knife
Covered in deep red;
That blade took her life,
It was her blood she shed.

There lie Mom and dad,
Clueless to her sorrow,
Don't know she's so sad -
Well, they will tomorrow.

And there lie her "friends"
Who just might not care.
"Friends till the end"
Well the "end" was now there.

And there lies a tear
Next to the bloodstain,
She's no longer here,
But no longer in pain.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
more depression. more death. no one truly knows what I think about and how I feel.... until I write my poems. Lemme know what you think.

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» Comments / Feedback
by lostdreamz08 (12-8-2004 - 03:37 AM)
wow..that poem was great...keep writing~

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