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ice
written by devilchild0110:22 PM 12/9/04The lake is thin today
an uncertain glass
sighing beneath my pressure.
Too easy to shatter
with a well-placed fist.
But she was out there
from the dawn,
cutting the snow from the surface
in clear and beautiful lines.
Whilst I, hazed,
couldn't see her for the trees,
afraid to set my foot
on the ice. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Peace.Love.Harmony (12-9-2004 - 10:32 PM)
| Oh, I really enoyed your poem. It reminded me of something in my life, but i might be interpreting it differently. |
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