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butterfly ritual
written by Schizophrenic_broken05:14 PM 12/10/04too many dreams have broken
been torn like butterflys wings
like the millions of tears ive cryed
hearts resting on all these things
said to much to take it back
broke too many hearts
wrote some nasty stuff as well
for me thats how it starts
tearing my wings
of my butterfly back
subtlness being
what they lack
for its all just so faked
another way to feel the pain
this is my butterfly ritual
repeating it all the same |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by maledeth (12-10-2004 - 05:20 PM)
| Very good poem....I like it....Nice work...keep writing. And....I've done the same, so..I know what you meant by repeteition and failure |
by devilchild01 (12-10-2004 - 05:44 PM)
by digital_dreAmir (1-4-2005 - 08:09 PM)
| This is the poem of yours I really liked the most. Thanks for commenting on mine. I was surprised, I didn't anyone would even read it. Well bye |
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