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Perfekt
written by ieatsmellysocks
08:18 PM 12/10/04
I thought you were perfekt
So I gave you my heart
But you handed it back
After ripping it apart

Every day I dreamed of you
Until the day finally came
The day I realized you hate me
I realized I was being insane

You told me you wanted
To beat me black and blue
But I wouldn’t really mind
Because I love pain and I love you

But when I see the hatred in your eyes
I know that I should stay away
That I should leave before I get hurt
But theres something im dying to say

Is it wrong for me to love you
To dream of you every night
You’re the only person ever nice to me
You made everything all right

But your everything but perfekt
I wish I didn’t know your name
I wish I never met you now
Because now im hurt im going insane

It may seem really pathetic
But all I want is you
I cant seem to get you out of my mind
Even after all the shit you put me through

I thought you were perfekt
So I gave you my heart
But you handed it back
After ripping it apart


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This poem makes me want to puke...please comment

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» Comments / Feedback
by DarkAngel13 (12-10-2004 - 08:45 PM)
I actually like this poem. I dont like wat its about but an abusive relationship is an endless hell until u find a way out and this is a great poem showing the thoughts inside there head.

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