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» Poem: don't go*
don't go*
written by Trapezium
03:53 PM 6/16/04
You've tried it before,
You've got nowhere,
You've tried it before,
So i know you would dare,
You've tried it before,
You're starting to scare,
You've tried it before,
I don't want you there,
You've tried it before,
I don't want you to open your wrists bare,
Slit them open and die,
You don't have to do it why,
Does it happen to a pretty face,
Life's such a disgrace,
Bad things will give you the chase,
Until it's too late,
And it ruins your fate,
I thought your life was great,
Until you told me these things,
And how much your life stings,
I don't want you to slit your wrists,
Because i would really miss,
You,
I don't want you to drown,
You deserve a crown,
Not a death bed,
Don't shoot yourself in the head,
Or anything like that,
Do you really think anyone would be sat-
isfied,
If you really died,
Think about it now,
People may think you are a cow,
But some still love you,
And they would do anything for you.
I'm not one of them,
And i'm not some kind of trend,
I'm just your freind,
That's trying to help the Aba i know,
That's trying to help the Aba you show,
The Aba that will grow,
In strength after this escapade,
You'll be driving in an escalade,
But please,

DON'T GO


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Aba please don't kill yourself, you are such a great freind, i couldn't bare it without you

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» Comments / Feedback
by Norway_babe (6-16-2004 - 04:01 PM)
don't worry. she won't. i belive in a thing called frienship. and i belive she does too:)

by Quietly_Haunted (6-17-2004 - 09:38 AM)
If I could talk to her right now...I would say "Suicide is one of the dumbest choices you could ever make! Don't make your friends and family become suicide survivors...don't make them lsoe you..don't make them mourn for you!" I know just what your going through, except, my best friend didn't tell anyone about his issues. His mom and sister found him in a coma in his apartment. And just a few days later, he was pronounced dead...it sucks..please make sure that Aba does NOT kill herself...Even I don't want that to happen to you...and I don't know you...you and your friend are in my prayers Hope things turn out right... Much Luv -Cass

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