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» Poem: Beautiful Girl
Beautiful Girl
written by SkterBoy131
03:05 AM 12/11/04
I never thought that this would happen
Exactly something i would've never imagined
I fell in love with a beautiful girl
who, in a second, become my world.

Her parents blocked me from what i hunted
To have that feeling of being wanted
I patiently wait to have her close
To hold her in my arms like i palm a rose.

She is as beautiful as a colored morning
Makes me feel like I am soaring
Nothing can stop me from loving this girl
Not a single thing in this exhausting world.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is about my girlfriend if you didnt notice.

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» Comments / Feedback
by fire_fae_33 (12-11-2004 - 03:31 AM)
that's awesome...i wish someone would write something about me like that

by trulybroken57 (12-11-2004 - 02:44 PM)
i'm with the person above me. ur gf is a really lucky person

by scared_alone (12-16-2004 - 06:31 PM)
im with all these people who commented!!

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