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» Poem: This world
This world
written by Trapezium
07:11 PM 6/16/04
Take a look around,
Blank out all fo the sound,
Delete the back drop,
Concentrate on the flop,
Of people's faces,
See that this world is just a mirror,
Of how people feel,
This world isn't the real deal,
If you closely bore into their mind,
And throw the surface behind,
Deep down you will find that no one is happy,
It's not as it should be,
I may be a little bit pyhscic,
I know im not a little bit thick,
But some people cannot see,
That everyone feels the same as me,
And deep down no-one is truly happy,
This is a sad place,
Look around you'll see a sad face,
Or someone masking their emotions,
Someone with the train of thought in motion.

I know this world is shit but,
We shouldn't let it get to us,
This world is ours but,
Everyone seems to make a fuss,
It should all be equally spread,
Everyone should have the same amount of bread,
I know that everyone is different but it is,
The only way to to this,
If everyone gets there own way,
There wouldn't be a place for us to stay,
No matter how poor it may be,
This is the place that you see,
Everyday of your life.


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» Comments / Feedback
by SilverlineKai (6-16-2004 - 09:06 PM)
Kahno dont start copying my poem titles ok lil bro

by Trapezium (6-17-2004 - 07:56 AM)
hey bro, there are probably 100s of other poems with "this world" as a name, it's just a name that come to my head, i didn't even realise you had a poem called "this world" i forget too easily

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