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» Poem: ##BEST FRIENDS FIGHTING....HATE IT!!!!#
##BEST FRIENDS FIGHTING....HATE IT!!!!#
written by devils angel 13
03:52 PM 12/11/04
Pulled by both sides,
wanting to be captured,
one hates you,
then the next.

Wishing that you were away,
wanting to make it all better,
locked inside your thoughts,
how do i fix this???

Jelousy surronds you,
being stared at with fearce eyes,
noticing your talking to the enemy,
and get pulled away...

Your sad eyes,
wanting it to be normal,
wanting people to be happy,
especially you......

Pulled by both sides,
wanting to be captured,
one hates you,
then the next.

thats what happens
when youre two best friends...
are in a fight....


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» Comments / Feedback
by tru_midnight_rose (12-11-2004 - 04:00 PM)
i know how u feel dudette im in da same situiation gd poemy

by Chicky12345 (12-11-2004 - 04:23 PM)
wow. i really like this poem, it has great meaning, and in fact i am the one who IS fighting, and my friend who is in the middle hates both of us sooo now i know how she feels.

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