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» Poem: You're an angel
You're an angel
written by Trapezium
09:54 PM 12/14/04
I'm trying to write a poem,
But the bloods not flowing through my veins.
I've got too much that's on my mind,
Too much on my brain.

I try so hard to fake a smile,
But all I do is frown.
Too depressed to carry on.
I think I'm going... down.

I wonder why I fight with mum,
And why she doesn't care at all.
I just wish for you to catch me,
When I take my fall.

But if I jump - get out the way,
I want to feel the rush.
I want to feel the gliding down,
The terrifying crush.

I will get a soft landing,
I'll land on feathers of death.
When I wake I wont be here,
I'll stand in angel's breath.

I'll be in the stars at night,
Those stars you wish upon.
Please don't wish to have me back,
'Cause I'll always be gone.

Remember every memory,
Or forget my times of life.
I haven't lived to tell the tale,
To have a gorgeous wife.

Well goodbye and so long,
Don't miss me when I'm dead.
Just know I'm watching over you,
Some words remain unsaid.

Some thoughts are never to be told,
Like why I ended everything.
Just know it was not your fault,
You're an angel, you're a blessing.


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» Comments / Feedback
by melons (12-14-2004 - 09:58 PM)
i love it :D im speachless for once :P its amazing

by sarah10087 (12-15-2004 - 09:49 AM)
"Don't miss me when I'm dead." dont worry i wont.

by (anonymous) (12-15-2004 - 05:59 PM)
hey it's kerri, cryptic_misery just to lazy to sign in LOL. I love this poem, and what's with the fuck face saying they wont' miss you? don't kill yourself hun, it isn't worth it, I love you lots lots and i'm always here for you *hugs* ♥

by Morbid Angel (12-15-2004 - 11:44 PM)
Sarah just...die plz k thnx :)

by FeeFee (12-16-2004 - 05:32 PM)
I love it!

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