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The Stars
written by darktinkerbell
04:01 AM 12/15/04
Shivering from fever
sweating while it's cold,
I lay upon this cold concrete
looking at the stars above
I'm too sick to see you
I sopose I should rest...
rest my eyes,
so I can get well,
but I sit outside,
looking at these beautiful stars,
our beautiful stars
I look up, and see you're missing me
can you see, I'm missing you too?
I hear my mom
screaming, begging me
to come inside
but her voice fades,
and the light is suddenly off
I'm looking up at these stars
thinking of you and me.....
of US and whywere where we are
are we ment to be?
is this it? true love?
does it really exist?
in your eyes I see it
in your embrace I feel it
these stars are shining
brighter than ever tonight
because I miss you
tonight before you go to sleep
look at the stars
and know I'm here
missing you, hoping
you're thinking of me too.
these stars connect our hearts
whenever we're apart.
I hope you will look up at these stars tonight
and think of me
I miss you


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
To Joel, I miss you much

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by IceBound (12-15-2004 - 04:47 PM)
missin you too much...

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