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» Poem: Image 3.5 (You and I)
Image 3.5 (You and I)
written by CaptainGaz
09:55 PM 12/15/04
As I sit here in my dark world,
I dream that once my voice will be heard.
And when it is, then I will call,
And pray that my soul will never fall.

You say you want me but then you go,
You leave me with pain and hurt and sorrow.
And as I sit and wait for your return,
The feelings are strong and my heart does burn.

I would give anything just to have you back,
But I know you’re gone, and my heart turned black.
I loved you then and I love you still,
I always have and I always will.

Even though your gone your still here with me,
One day we will meet again, you will see,
When the time is right and death comes to me,
I will go with grace and you and I will be.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
In this one the guy finally cracks up. This could mean two things; Either he is saying goodbye to his wife and accepting that she is gone, or he is saying goodby to the old him. This is the change, the new him

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» Comments / Feedback
by sarah10087 (12-15-2004 - 10:04 PM)
i know what you mean :( Lost love eh? what would we be without it? Happy!

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