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I'm Sorry for Breathing
written by Lothiriel02:19 AM 12/18/04Sorry for breathing
I couldn't tell that it was holding you back
I couldn't save what little was left
if ever there was anything to be saved at all
Sorry for breaking down again
like I do every now and then
Sorry for painting the sky with shame
everytime you say I've been good
Sorry for colouring pictures that made you think I were a child
I guess you forgot what it's like to still have an inner child to find peace with
It's not my fault you lost your way somewhere inside
Sorry for breathing
I didn't mean to knock you down and not be there to break your fall
Because I'm falling too
slowly through all that is unmoral in me
Too ashamed to admit that I can't breath on my own
Sorry when I say that you make me feel worthless
like I need to hear it over again
Sorry for pointing out that you are no more perfect than I
I can't correct your faults anymore than you can try and save mine
but you tried anyway and you made it hard to breath
I don't want to be perfect for anyone but me
I don't want to feel sorry for breathing
I didn't mean to knock you down and not be there to break your fall
Because I'm falling too
and I used you to claw my way back up again
Maybe it's all to normal to me and I can't understand what all I do wrong
but I'm sorry to say that I'm too ashamed to admit
that I can't breath on my own
I'm sorry to say
I'm sorry |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by PredictableHatred (12-18-2004 - 12:30 PM)
| I do not have much to say about this poem.. Except that it is very good... Please keep writting... |
by (anonymous) (12-21-2004 - 07:19 AM)
| I was going through a time when i left behind a friend, it hurt so bad. and all of the reason i left my friend, where expressed in this poem. its beautiful. BTW. may i put it n my journal? my LJ...ill give u credit. |
by Lothiriel (12-21-2004 - 11:02 AM)
| plz e mail w/your information if u would like to put it in your journal, surely I wouldn't mind, for it's already been copyritten and published. I would just like to know a little more about u than "anonymous" lol
lothroxx@hotmail.com |
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