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» Poem: God? Part 2
God? Part 2
written by ForsakenDream
05:46 AM 12/18/04
not a day goes by that I dont wounder,
Wounder twards the sky.
What the Fuck do you want from me?
Why do the ones I love suffer so?
Do my questions have answers,
or are you laughing right at them?

I question because I doubt.
I dont get an answer so I shake my head.
Left again for this world to take,
I release all of my mistakes...

A shooting star across the sky,
I make a wish and I wish to die.
Just so I can see,
If your real, or if your fake....

I see the change in others lives,
Is it cause of you?
Or cause of someone else?
SO many wrong things I do,
Must mean you hate me.
But I dont hate you.
I just question some times the things you do....


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» Comments / Feedback
by darkmaster (12-18-2004 - 06:07 AM)
This poem makes no sence!

by 2deo (12-18-2004 - 11:28 AM)
i really liked this, i prefer the first one but this is good...keep it up, i love ur work

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