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Suicide Note
written by devils angel 1306:19 PM 12/19/04this time im saying goodbye,
its not like all the rest,
i want you to know i love you,
cause its hiding in my chest.
i wont see you no more
cause your going away
i just want you to know
that are friendship is still the same.
i don't want to miss you,
i don't want to cry,
i dont want to wish you
were still by my side.
i'll love you forever,
you'll be by my side
i'll never forget
our final goodbye. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by nuthingz_child (12-20-2004 - 12:03 AM)
| omg.. thats the best poem ive read all day.. |
by wmctalon (12-21-2004 - 08:32 PM)
| wow...this is one of the best poems i've read on here....a lot of emotion in it |
by Depressed_Shadows (12-22-2004 - 03:11 PM)
| Wow..Just wow. This is indeed one of the best poems I've read. Somehow, I always seem to pick the ones that relate to me somehow...Great emotive descriptions... |
by Satyrn (12-23-2004 - 06:08 PM)
| Very nice... Good work yet again... |
by fuzzypunkhat (12-23-2004 - 07:53 PM)
| I like it and all but sorry. People are just making the title of their poems a suicidal note so they can hit the top poem list. I've seen thirteen poems on here already with the 'suicidal note/letter' thing goin on. But I do like it ;/ -Sky |
by X0xPaRiSx0X (12-24-2004 - 01:36 AM)
| its good.....not one of the best i think but hey you expressed yourself and it is kinda sad, it could be alot better but you made an effort and yea i like the ending :) |
by (anonymous) (12-24-2004 - 04:45 AM)
| i loved your poem and i hope you dont care but i wrote it down |
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