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I Love You and I can’t stop (S.L)
written by mattwhatever07:08 PM 12/19/04I love you and I can’t stop
I can’t pretend I don’t
But I don’t want to lose what we’ve got
You’re the most amazing girl I’ve ever met
We are so similar it scary
But there’s something I’ll never get
We’ve got a link that can’t be broken
You’re so special to me
But you say let’s be friends, that’s a token
I can’t go on lying
I thought I could
I can’t keep denying
Even though maybe I should
It builds deep inside
I thought it would work
In you I confide
Yesterday it happened again
The connection the link
It causes so much pain
That Friday I was happy
I loved being with you
I don’t care if it’s sappy
I know you don’t feel the same
I’ve accepted that
Lives just not fair
I don’t know if I can go on with
This charade
But being without you that’s what I’m really afraid |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by sarah10087 (12-19-2004 - 07:13 PM)
| . . . im not offended....just didnt excpect that.. |
by cryinginside (12-19-2004 - 08:25 PM)
| wow thats exactly how i feel about one of my best friends! |
by diamond_gloss (12-19-2004 - 09:19 PM)
| when the other person, doesnt feel the same there is no point. making urself feel this way. let her go, get over it and find someone who will love u back |
by angel_78016 (12-19-2004 - 09:23 PM)
| Your poemis very moving. I was in a situation similar to that but the best thing for me was to move on. |
by UNDEAD233 (12-22-2004 - 05:39 AM)
| diamond_gloss it's not that easy i'm in love right now but he doesn't love me any more it's been 7 months sence we broke up its so hard i hate this i just want him to be happy so im deling with it but there is other things that he is doing to me that i just want to die and i dont even now why i still love him i don't want to but i do and i hate it so its not as easy said then done it takes a long time cuz i was also in love with another guy and it took two years to get over him but i still love him he is now my best friend though but i know how you feel and i'm sorry i know how it feels and it sucks ass! |
by LiveWithPassion (12-22-2004 - 08:16 AM)
| dude ur not alon...i feel the same way
ur poem is awesome |
by TearzOfBlood (12-22-2004 - 10:10 AM)
| i see where your comeing from i walked in on my bf fucking another chick yesterday and i loved him soo much i always will so i cut myself till i couldnt move had to go to the hospital and i just got back my bf's new gf who he cheated on me with came to my house and i fucking stabbed her in the sholder he deserves it fucking lil whore but yeah i really like you poem you should look at mine sometime. |
by Broken Phoenix (12-24-2004 - 08:58 AM)
| i loved it! i unfortunatly feel the same.
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by Depressed_Shadows (12-24-2004 - 01:39 PM)
| I think I'm gonna cry... You've, you've just put my life situation into words. That's exactly how I feel about a girl, this is one of the most amazing poems I've read...Denial is a hard thing... |
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