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No reason to ridicule
written by .purity.07:04 PM 12/20/04Every time it meant nothing to me
But I never knew should
Every second passes slowly
Simply waiting for what could have been
As all the thoughts swell up inside of me…
All the while I hear the voice its not dying
It swells up once again
I only want to scream I’m crying
You realise it never ends
Anything that depends on anything that you said
Yes I care but I’m aware that it’s all in my head
All the confusions deriving delusions
You say I’m nothing and say that I’m minuscule
You say you don’t care, that leaves NO REASON TO RIDICULE |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I don't know... It's kinda bad really. one of the best I've done.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Lothiriel (12-21-2004 - 04:52 AM)
| You should never say that your work is bad, because it all comes from what is inside of you, and living is never a bad feeling - even if it does seem like that sometimes.
This poem is EXCELLENT, absolutely beautiful Purity. Your form of writing and word usage is so well beyond your years, and I respect that so much. |
by .purity. (12-22-2004 - 09:39 AM)
| You don't know what that means to me |
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