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» Poem: a plead for you
a plead for you
written by Xx brOken xX
10:12 PM 12/20/04
i hate you!
everything you put me through.
damn boy, why me?
you may not know it,
but you're still hurting me,
with what you do.
i know that we don't go out anymore,
but every time i hear that you're with another girl,
it kills me.
now you're with her.
Her, why Her?!
Out of all the girls you can have,
you pick HER..?
i dont understand and i'm sure i never will.
your friends tell me that they don't
understand how you could dump me.
They say i'm better than her.
what does she have, that i dont?
would she die for you, like i would?
would she even put up a fight? - - i would.
i've been thinking about you more than ever.
Maybe its because another girl is holding something
that belongs to me,
that i love and need,
my everything,
my world.
or maybe its because i'm finally realizing you're not mine anymore.
maybe because its hitting me that i'm not yours,
and you love someone else now.
oh, how i yearn for your touch and your kisses right now!
i should've never walked away from that kiss.
if i would have known that would be our last kiss forever,
i would still be there,
kissing you,
never wanting to let you go.
so much pain and anger is inside.
i'm just holding it all in,
trying not to let it out on you.
i dont want to look weak infront of you.
but i really want to tell you how much i'm hurting,
and how i need your comfort,
hear your voice,
feel your touch,
see into your eyes,
taste your sweet kisses.
so much hurt that i dont know what to do.
sometimes i feel like dying.
other times i just cry myself to sleep.
Damn! how could you do me like this!?
was it really that hard to give me another try?
thats all i want,
one more chance.
if you gave me that,
my world would be so beautiful again..


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i found this the other day in my drawer. i wrote it on 1/11/04.. so its been awhile. i dont like it. lol i really think it sucks.

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» Comments / Feedback
by BigBombB (12-20-2004 - 10:23 PM)
Meh, it's decent, remove the trendy, cliche stuff and it's actually pretty good.

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