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» Poem: Bloodrain*#
Bloodrain*#
written by Trapezium
05:39 PM 6/19/04
I'm gone,
I'm gone from this world thanks to you,
I'm gone,
I'm gone because of the thing you must do,
I'm gone,
Because,
You drew the energy,
Took it all from me,
And i am thankful.

Suck my blood from my wings,
And swallow up all of my things,
Consume the fear it brings,
Maybe it will make it alright,
When you inhale all of my fright,
And make me sleep tonight,
You spit it out and here comes bloodrain,
Getting rid of all my pain,
Pouring down like the soul of one slain,
I feel the energy slide out,
Eventually i just have to shout,
To see if i'm still about.

I'M GONE,
I'm gone from this world thanks to you,
I'M GONE,
I'm gone because of the thing you must do,
I'M GONE,
Because,
You drew the energy,
Took it all from me,
AND I AM THANKFUL.

I'm burning on the outside,
It's weird i have no inside,
And least i have never lied,
It's a feeling new to me but i love it,
It feels so good i feel so fit,
It feels so good i wont feel like shit,
ANYMORE
I wont ever feel sore,
I wont ever need to bore,
A hole into my mind,
Just to see all i find,
Is the past i put behind.

I'm gone,
I'm gone from this world thanks to you,
I'm gone,
I'm gone because of the thing you must do,
I'm gone,
Because,
You drew the energy,
Took it all from me,
And i am thankful.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Well this is the second song for the band.

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» Comments / Feedback
by cryptic_misery (6-20-2004 - 09:00 PM)
I absolutely love it. Very very creative. And death like...mmm death >>>teehee

by vampire_princess (6-20-2004 - 11:20 PM)
wow! that was reallly good! and you said it was your second song for your band thats awsome i wish i could hear the song acctually being sung that would be so awsome! well good luck with your band!

by Psycho_Penguin (7-16-2004 - 08:09 PM)
Great chorus! I loved it!

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