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» Poem: Sick With Longing
Sick With Longing
written by Lothiriel
06:46 AM 12/21/04
It hurts
every time I look into your eyes
Aching so much more than I can comprehend
and confusion is more than I understand
Why is it that I'm so open
So much made to love
So much made to be misunderstood
Too much like what I fear myself to be

Pawn me off
I break so easily
Why do I have to take to you so seriously
What should I try and prove

So sick
So sick for you
Every step comes with a difficulty
Like stones embedded in you
eventually you can’t breath
from all the effort of devotion

So many things we have to change
Too many things to feel a gain
Stone my heart and watch it fall
I’ll stitch it together again

So sick
So sick for you
Every step comes with a difficulty
like stones embedded in you
eventually you can’t breath
from all the effort of loving


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©2004 Loth Roxx Writings

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by (anonymous) (12-21-2004 - 07:01 AM)
wow.It's very deep and put together so well.

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