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Atheists Rule!
written by Emo_Death_Wish12:14 AM 4/9/04
Atheists Rule
Come one, come all
Come see the Christians fall
They say they love
They say their god has a plan for us all
And they lie
And they hurt us too
Tell them they're wrong an they deny
Cuz they need their religion to cling to
Come young, come old
Come see what the Christians hold
They're beating their children
They're telling me my hearts gone cold
Come tall, come short
Come see the Christians in court
Listen to those hypocrits lie
And they call me stupid as their retort
Atheists RULE!
Corinne Guilday
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| » Comments / Feedback | by betterthangoogle (5-6-2004 - 02:15 AM)
| It feels like there isn't much concrete structure and that the rhyme scheme is forced upon it. If you wanted to improve this, I would say make it flow better, make it more smooth.
And as for subject matter, I won't comment except for, perhaps you should get out in the world, the steriotypes and generalizations as you have written are quite ... well degrading to yourself :P |
by maledeth (9-17-2004 - 06:37 AM)
| It's the catholics that opress children, you fucking twat!!!! |
by XdarkXaliceX (4-23-2005 - 02:58 AM)
| well idk bout the rest of those ppl but i realy liked the message it had |
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