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.:~'For my eyes only'~:.
written by .purity.11:31 PM 12/21/04An eye for an eye,
a tooth for a tooth
the things that i do now
are never for you
and if it leaves me lonely
this shit is bare for me,
and for my eyes only
cannot hide it though i try
deeper feeling bleeding through
feel as though it never dies
and this sight is not for you
all cares draining slowly
i wish i could laugh out too
yet it's for my eyes only
empty space and scarred
it's another level
locked, walled up and barred
all conections severed
rotten and lowly
in my shame you revel
It was for my eyes only |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Thesickness wrote a poem called 'for my eyes only' so i told him to submit it, and claims to only remember the lines 'for my eyes only' and 'an eye for an eye' which i thought really sucks so i tried to re-write it for him.Hopefully one day he'll find the origional. My thanks to Ty.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by .purity. (12-22-2004 - 02:44 PM)
| please comment. i wanna know what ya think. |
by .purity. (12-22-2004 - 06:10 PM)
| the one poem, my faveoate poem, and no-one comments. story o my life... *grump* |
by .purity. (12-22-2004 - 06:11 PM)
| damn... how do you spell favorit? does it have an 'e'? favorite. yeah, that looks right.... |
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