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» Poem: Purity Knight R.I.P
Purity Knight R.I.P
written by .purity.
11:49 AM 12/22/04
dwelling with these thoughts again
it is here i shall remain
a long time since i've known bliss
but for now it won't be missed
carve the name to show the need
Bury her, the brocken seed
Set me free for Purity

Alive and sin-sticky clean and dead
she doesnt know how to be lead
Now she can see
Now she is silenced
Bury her, feed the need
Set me free for Purity

Mud and the rain
put sunshine to shame
now a child arrives to blame
the inventor of the malice game
a paler face-which shines within
a message unread and written in sin
a sorrowful loss-a smack in the face
to know she is now in her rightful place
Purity- of silenced state
help was at hand, yet was simply too late


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Some say the whole Purity thing is a hoax but nevertheless, it has inspired alot of my poems before and continues to do so. i hope it will help you too. go to: http://www.crimescene.com/purity/index.html

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» Comments / Feedback
by Ave~For~A~Rose (12-22-2004 - 11:56 AM)
Like the poem... Makes you think, I like that.

by TearzOfBlood (12-22-2004 - 12:04 PM)
i like it THANKS for the comments on my poems......look at the rest of mine plz and thankz you

by .purity. (12-22-2004 - 02:19 PM)
thank you so much, I'll check all your poems.(well, as long as there are less than 50)

by 666_TonKpills_666 (2-12-2005 - 11:06 PM)
That is a cut-throat poem - dark and profound

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