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» Poem: someone read my god damn poem
someone read my god damn poem
written by .purity.
04:38 PM 12/22/04
someone read my god damn poem
im lazy, i got nuthin else to do
just, please oh god, read my poem
you! at the desk! oh please wont you?

i'm all alone, in my room
just eating peanuts
listen to the stuff i bought for you
just you read my god damn poem
and i'll buy the album for you too

sit among my notes, listen to music
maybe write a bit if i'm that assed
just take a peak at my lyrics
and i'll give you a peanut if u ask!
woo!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
How awsome was that for a poem about itself!
here, *passes* want a peanut?
whoop! merry xmas!

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» Comments / Feedback
by coax_and_destroy (12-22-2004 - 04:50 PM)
omg! i love it! lol god that is rightous:P rock on! rock the fuck on!!

by .purity. (12-22-2004 - 04:53 PM)
most of the inspiration i must hand to the peanuts.

by coax_and_destroy (12-22-2004 - 04:56 PM)
peanuts all the way!! well then.. i give a thumbs up to them too

by .purity. (12-22-2004 - 05:12 PM)
the peanuts say "it was nuthin" they should be showcased.

by coax_and_destroy (12-22-2004 - 05:26 PM)
that they should.. and if they were mine, if there were any left indeed they would.. indeed they would

by .purity. (12-22-2004 - 05:31 PM)
there are some left... I'll place them on my moniter in loving memory... I'll carve a plaqe... build a statue... and let them have a go at replacing Geoge Bush!... ok... it wasn't that good...

by coax_and_destroy (12-22-2004 - 05:40 PM)
good enough for me, and good enough for them, or so they told me.. so hey! its all good. oh holy peanuts i worship thy greatness...? yeah whatever.. ok.. mmhmm..

by SlitMyThroat (12-22-2004 - 05:40 PM)
I WANNA PEANUT!!!!!!

by coax_and_destroy (12-22-2004 - 05:54 PM)
get youre own!! these are "holy" peanuts

by .purity. (12-22-2004 - 06:02 PM)
lol

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