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Black Rose*
written by Trapezium04:03 PM 6/21/04A beautiful red rose was growing,
It dulled and started slowing,
Eventually it faded to black,
The thorns did start to crack,
And writhe along the walls,
It grows and then it stalls,
Growing darker every time,
Leaving a trail of grime.
This rose it is still pretty,
The darkness it is absorbing,
The black petals have been through so much,
These black petals are souls,
That are seeing bad times,
This flower is full of Angels,
Angels of Hope,
Like You, Aba and I,
all of these angels wish to leave,
But they are getting help,
They will be helped before they make,
A poisonous blackness of death,
Leaving a noxious odour behind.
This rose will forever stay black,
But when we have found our way,
It will shine and gloss for another day,
The odour will disappear and,
The darkness will abstand,
And peace will be restored,
These Angels will stay never to be bored,
And they will love each other in a way,
That no-one can realise until they feel it stay. |
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This is just for you Emma
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| » Comments / Feedback | by cryptic_misery (6-22-2004 - 12:43 AM)
by cryptic_misery (6-27-2004 - 07:35 AM)
| also you know what, we write alot of the same kinds of poems, this one you wrote reminds me of my poem Dying Rose, I hope you like it...if you've read it. |
by vampire_princess (7-14-2004 - 05:47 PM)
| you know you have a wonderful way of putting things where there very sad buy yet you still have so much hope and i love that.... |
by psycho_bunny (8-6-2004 - 08:33 AM)
| simply amazeing...
you writeing is jaw droping... you exspress your self so awesomly.
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