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» Poem: Too Late
Too Late
written by Lady Deathstrike
07:26 PM 12/23/04
I screamed for help
but no one came
now its too late to save me
look I'm sinking
look I'm drowning
wasting away into oblivion
why wont anyone grab my hand
and pull me to the surface again
is it too late to save me
now must I die
is it too late
will no one rescue me
the oceans too deep
I dont know how to swim
is it too late
too late for me
now must I die


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» Comments / Feedback
by .purity. (12-23-2004 - 07:30 PM)
i like the metaphors.

by remembernikki (12-23-2004 - 07:40 PM)
I like it alot!

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