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» Poem: The Bloody Breakup
The Bloody Breakup
written by CemetaryDrive
12:30 AM 12/25/04
Every time I think about you
I want to die
Every time I talk about to
I want to cry
Because I don't want to feel like that again
I don't want to have to rely on a friend
I'm never gonna make that mistake
all you do is take my heart
and stab it through with a stake
I'm never gonna love again
I'm never gonna cry over you again
Love is fake
I'm throwing my heart into the bottom of a lake
Love really bites
I Hate you
I know you hate me too
you want me to die by six bloody knives
but I'm telling you now
i don't care how
much you hate me
leave my thoughts alone
a life let me own


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» Comments / Feedback
by _Anything_to_be_Loved_ (12-25-2004 - 12:34 AM)
that was a really good poem...

by BigBombB (12-25-2004 - 12:51 AM)
I admit, you're pretty good, a little more imagination could go a long way though.

by cg05punk (3-6-2005 - 03:41 PM)
i read almost all of your poems they are awesome...but deap and thats what i love to read...not cus your in pain...its so i no how you feel about things...expecially in your life...i would really lixe it if u would U2U me...ASAP...first of all because im also in a band...and we are calld "The Undescripted"...I am also the lead singer and play the guitar...(eletric)...and i love Marilian Manson...so U2U me ASAP...please..and read my poems Im not done posting all of them cus i have almost as much as you do...and im the one that writes the songs in my band "The Undiscripted"

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