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Fallen
written by blackrose_bleedred07:50 AM 12/25/04Forget it
It matters not
I mean it so
It said a lot
I tried again
But yet i failed
To get up once more seems to much as a chore
Once i believed
That i could succeed
But then i saw
I would only bleed
The pain of life
As the light of day
Casting hurt |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by blackgothicblood (12-25-2004 - 06:29 PM)
| its short but i can tell it has a lot of meaning anyway awsome job |
by (anonymous) (12-27-2004 - 06:30 PM)
| that was awesome. are there more? |
by brokenheart27 (12-30-2004 - 05:12 AM)
| that was a really good poem |
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