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Falling In Love With You
written by darktinkerbell07:32 PM 12/25/04I'm falling, I can feel it,
my heart in my throat,
when I see you,
butterflies when you call,
smiles when you hold me.
I'm happy with you,
throughout all we've been through,
all the broken hearts,
I feel we're ready to step forward,
and move on, to making
our relationship better....
I know, I can't lose you,
I miss you so much right now,
I'm lost without you.
I'm falling for you,
so fast and I'm scared......
I'm falling in love with you,
and I'm scared you're not falling with me,
I'm scared I'm alone,
I've been feeling so alone,
for what feels like months.
and I need you here with me,
I miss you,
I'm falling......
and you're not here to catch me |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by amberlashea11241 (12-28-2004 - 04:53 AM)
| hey i really like your poem its cool =) |
by (anonymous) (12-28-2004 - 09:39 AM)
| Hey this is a great poem.. and its very true of myself at the moment! :) |
by (anonymous) (12-29-2004 - 03:47 AM)
| HEY WASSUP GURL THIS BE LAGGIT AND I FEEL THE SAME WAY ABOUT THIS GURL KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK |
by (anonymous) (12-29-2004 - 06:28 AM)
| hEey! wOow! that*s reallie incredible. . like the whOle pOem `cEpt the end gOes fOr mE RIGHT nOw. . and i reallie "cOnnected" with it i guess yOu cOuld say! but yEa. . it*s great and all i can say is keep it up yOu gOtz a talent! ;-) IM mE if yOu ever wanna. . my sn is catchmeifyoohcan |
by (anonymous) (12-29-2004 - 08:02 AM)
| wow this poem is incresdable!!there r no words to express it!its just awesome!keep up the work! |
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by ~twisted_legacy~ (12-31-2004 - 12:08 PM)
| the emotion in this is so complex...it's an amazing poem and i hope to become as good a writer as you are...thnx for your inspiring work |
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