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» Poem: what have i done?
what have i done?
written by Trapezium
07:47 PM 6/22/04
Oh no what have i done?
I love you more than anything,
And i bring you down with everything,
I hate myself for this,
I hate myself for this.

I took at all out on the one whom i love,
The one i'd do anything for,
The one that never makes me feel sore,
Unless i lose her,
I can't believe i did,
I'm still such a kid.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I love you Trude, i take it all back i was just confused

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» Comments / Feedback
by Norway_babe (6-23-2004 - 10:45 AM)
awww baby! i love you!! bad news.... mom denied... u can't come.... i'm not old enough... sorry hunni...

by Norway_babe (6-23-2004 - 10:45 AM)
but i'll be urs still!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:heart:

by cryptic_misery (6-27-2004 - 07:33 AM)
aww i see how much you two really love eachother. I have the same kind of relationship. If either of you reads this, be sure to know that if both of you believe, you WILL see eachother. I love both of you. Never let your love die.

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