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» Poem: Save a life
Save a life
written by Hondo1
06:56 PM 12/26/04
Dying inside, she is
Underneath all that happiness, she's sighing
She's crying, she's dying, she doesn't care
Her friends are trying, but she's still crying
She plans to take her own, but her friends perswade her to keep going on,
she wants to stop, but presses on.
She shields her face;her life; by a knife;
but just as she is about to put an end to;
a friend helps a friend in need.
She reaches out for a helping hand;
And finds two.

A life was saved that day. Can you not do the same thing to someone you know?


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This is about someone trying to commit suicide, if you didn't get it Also:

Please people, I find it an important notation to say what you think, please leave comments on my work! I like to see what people think!!

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