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» Poem: you took me for a fool
you took me for a fool
written by vampire_princess
01:40 AM 12/27/04
Alone in my room,
Surrounded with gloom,
Not really sure what to do,
When all my thoughts are only of you.

Once long ago,
You were my love, my life,
I used to walk with such a strife,
But now I’d rather have a knife.

I used to be brilliant,
I used to be smart,
I used to have such a huge heart,
But soon it all fell apart.

You stole my innocence away,
and to that I say,
hell is where you shall stay,
each and every single god damn day.

you took me for a fool,
and used me like I was your step-stool,
for some reason I thought you were cool,
but now your no more to me than a mule.

I survived your abuse,
Now I’m not a recluse,
So you had better vamoose,
Before you’re the one being abused.


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by MidnightCurse (12-27-2004 - 07:01 AM)
I liked it very much...definitely had a point...brilliant!

by MaterLuna-26 (1-5-2005 - 04:47 AM)
that is a great poem has a good point. please keep righting cause your really great. some many people can relate to this poem.

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