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Broken World
written by Punk_Ska_dude666
11:16 PM 12/27/04
In this broken world
theres all these broken homes
and kids Broken up inside
cuz of their broken lives
sometimes i wish that i could just break into someones
house and break all their stuff
maybe only to break all this anger
that i have pent up
and itz breakin my heart to hear all these
broken tales
of broken dreams and broken hopes
and so it seems all these broken dreams can lead to broken streets and broken towns and broken states and nobody can relate to all this hate in this Broken world and it will never change cuz itz too damn late....


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
not my best poem but maybe someone will like it...

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» Comments / Feedback
by Sharrain (12-31-2004 - 10:06 PM)
man your writting is mad, it doesnt say all shit that otehr ppl say. keep it up

by Foiazzy (1-2-2005 - 06:22 PM)
It's good, man.

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