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Lost Love
written by Punk_Ska_dude666
01:44 AM 12/28/04
It was like you were an angel sent from above
to give me your love
Sometimes I had to touch your face just to see if you were real
that's how i still feel like you were just a wonderful dream
why did you have to take so many drugs at that party? i feel like it's my fault i'm so sorry
i told not to take anything they offered you it's not that kind of party but they drugged you up and now i feel so broken up inside and how you died right there in my arms after you passed out they said it was no harm but you died on the way to the hospital.....THOSE FUCKIN LIARS! they said that it was nothing diar.....why couldnt it have been me....because i knew better.......and this is like my letter to send up above with all of my love.......


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
itz about my ex gf....she overdosed on extasy last year....you can comment if you want....

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by Sharrain (12-31-2004 - 10:04 PM)
i like this, its deep and really says something...

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