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» Poem: When I changed!
When I changed!
written by ForsakenDream
03:47 AM 12/31/04
It felt so cold, when I changed,
you left me for another, but thats ok.
All the words, that you screamed,
Makes me hate my everything.
You took me home, stripped me of my life,
You pushed me out, when I started to cry.

I dressed you up as an angel,
And cut off your wings,
Bent your halo, cause of what you did to me.

I walked alone, in the dark,
Life consumed me, then left me alone.
I saw you there, in his arms,
I killed him, one less bastard gone.
I took you home, set you on the glass,
I pulled off your wings, then I laughed..


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Yes I realize I used the Deftones theme here at the end! But it fit my poem so well!!

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by Psychoace (12-31-2004 - 03:52 AM)
still pretty good.....

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