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Go ahead slit your wrists!
written by Trapezium01:30 PM 12/31/04| You've got so many people that hate you I guess. What happened to those who lvoe you more than the rest? No, apparantly they don't care at all. No one's pushing you to make the fall! Stop lying about cutting just to be cool. It only makes you look stupid, you fool! Take that blade and drag it down your wrists. I said down, not across! Are you to scared to make the slice? To lay your fate on loaded dice? Finally you've made it bleed, now go a little deeper! I can't even see the skin peel away! Prove you're so much weaker! You can't handle any of this, but you don't even know how to cut! go down the artery, pierce it for fuck sake! I'll see you in the obituary. oh maybe I wont, It depends if you take my advice stop lying and live your life! you dn't even know what cutting feels like! Stop trying to give self harmers a bad name. When I'm finished with you, you'll hang your heads in shame! Rip the flesh, succumb to the pain. Watch the blood trickle from your veins! Realise you'd never have done this before me. I'm your messiah, I've set you free. Now go ahead and die. That's all you ever wanted right? Go ahead and slit your wrists deeper tonight. Down the artery and every vein on both your arms. You shouldn't be scared, you should lay there calm. You don't know what self hate feels like. So stop claiming you do! Just go ahead and slit your wrists, before I do it for you! Go on! You don't know what you're missing. Instead you stand there pissing. Yourself. You never had the guts to see it through, fuck your lying little words, stupid fucking sheep! Go back to your herds! Fuck your stupid "anti-christ" ass. Go pray like you do all the time. Fuck the crucufix and it's lies! Kneel beside my fucking shrine. It's I that haped you realise, you're life is NOT full of demise. You lying fucking scum, come to me, worship me and succumb. I showed you how to cut, and you hated it. I rid you of your shit. So fucking come here and say sorry for your lying. For fuck sake I know you're dying! Everyone dies, so why claim it's so bad? Apprantly your dying dies are the best you'll veer have. So back the fuck up, shut the fuck up and drink the fuck up. Lick the blood from your wounds and suck my fucking dick. I'll slap you around you lying little prick! Cutting is in issue, but it's not one you have to face. Shut the fuck up or I'll put you in your place! Go ahead, slit your wrists if life's so bad. No one loves you do they? You have a family that care and would do anything so you could see another day, but no. they don't understand what you feel. Stop and think. It's YOU that doesn't know what's real. |
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Dedicated to all of those lame-ass-twats that claim to be cutters.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by sarah10087 (12-31-2004 - 01:37 PM)
| For once, i actually liked a poem of urs, however, is still get annoyed by ur inflated ego, "I'm your messiah, I've set you free." Surely if you hate urself like you claim, you wouldnt have such an arrogant attitude, ergo, are you not one of the many that this poem is aimed at? |
by Trapezium (12-31-2004 - 03:02 PM)
| Just because I hate myself, doesn't mean I can't see the truth. I'm not one of the money this is aimed at. I don't have a problem wiht people that do actually self harm, but lying about doing it is wrong. I don't lie about it. I could prove it, but there's many ways the proof could've been forged, and I'm not really sick minded enough to take photos of it. I don't cut anymore though anyway. I stopped because I found other, more effective coping mechanisms. You claim my attitude is arrogant, but I'm unlike most arrogant people. When I say I can do something, or I will do something - I'll prove it. i'll do exactly what I say. I'm dissimilar to all of those backstabbers. If I have something to say, I'll say it to someone's face. 'tis not arrogance, 'tis bravery, knowledge and understanding. |
by sarah10087 (12-31-2004 - 04:10 PM)
| 'tis a fucking pain in the arse that what 'tis!!!! u love yourself, claiming to be a messiah so you cant hate ur self, you have no common grounding, your angry for no apparent reason and you are just like a 13yr old "goth" who just hates society for the sake of it. |
by Trapezium (12-31-2004 - 05:03 PM)
| by sarah10087 (31-12-04 - 16:10)
'tis a fucking pain in the arse that what 'tis!!!! u love yourself, claiming to be a messiah so you cant hate ur self, you have no common grounding, your angry for no apparent reason and you are just like a 13yr old "goth" who just hates society for the sake of it.
I don't love myself. It's foolish to think so. Anyone that knows me knows that you're lying. I have so many reasons to be angry. I'm not gonna start naming you a few of them. I wear black makeup on the odd occasion. It doesn't mean I'm a goth. And for your information, most true goths don't hate the world at all, it's foolish to think so. Why do you obsess over calling people 13 year olds? Is it meant to be offensive? Can I tell you, you were 13 once. You act like you still are. I have many many reasons to dislike society, but you're too blind to open your eyes and see the shithole we've been placed in. Just because I hate myself, doesn't mean I can't lead you out. |
by sarah10087 (1-1-2005 - 01:59 PM)
| If you hated ur self you would not refer to yourself as something special. your arrogance is beyond compare to th worst ive seen, although your open about your looks(or lack of) you seem to compensate by over emphasising the power of your poetry! At the expense of crticising others. Making other ppl feel small, well, trying to. Listen your act may fool some ppl but i know that your not as great as you like to think and that you try to gain power and status on this site to make up for your lack of it in real life. |
by Trapezium (1-1-2005 - 02:19 PM)
| Well, when you get told your special a minimum of 30 times a day, it does go to your head. You wouldn't know, though, I doubt anyone would ever compliment you. You still talk about my supposed arrogance, yet ask anyone that really knows me and they'll tell you I'm not arrogant in the slightest. I don't "over-emphasize" anything. I used to think my poetry was crap for ages. I had so many people disagreeing with me, people would shout at me because my poetry "is amazing" and I'm "a poetic genious" (quotes) Many people have told me to publish most of my poems and many have also told me I'm their favourite poet. I'm sorry, but if that many people think I'm good then I am. You're just jealous because your poetry showcases an exceptionally poor quality. If people didn't want to be criticized the wouldn't leave the comments box open. I don't try to make people feel small, see, I just tell it like it is, and I don't care if it hurts peoples feelings. I'd rather tell the truth than lie. I don't act, little girl. So less of the pathetic talk already. hmmm. Lack of status in real life? When I was 12 I could have got £1200 a month for making websites because I have awards for them. Wether you like it or not, I'm popular, too. I have a lot of respect in real life, as does my whole family. Yeah I've got such a low fucking "rank" that people are scared of me, that really shouts out a lack of power doesn't it? Stupid girl. Just because I can have power on websites, doesn't mean I don't have it in real life, ebcause the fact is: I have power. You're just jealous, and you're finding imaginary faults, just so you don't feel so small. |
by Cut_Wrist_Risk (1-1-2005 - 06:14 PM)
| I thought it was excelent. Khano you really did a great job on this one. Sarah your comment on "I actually liked one of your poems" amde no sense whats o ever. Cause if u didn't like any other ones why would u take ur time to read this one? hmmm there's a thought if u only read his poems to write what u don't like about it and write shit that isn't true, go do that to your own work cause no one here cares. Raise ur hand if u care-well looks like no once cares. :) |
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