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Black Steed
written by Hondo105:41 PM 12/31/04A Black Shadow is running on the hill beneath you.
You see it move.
You are Struck with the thought, "Is it a demond?"
Your feet move fast, to see what this black mystery is.
You reach the bottom of the hill and there it is, A black Steed.
A Black Horse, a Stallion with a mane and tail flowing like a Sorcer's cloak, whipping behind like a black whip.
The Stallion pawes at the earth, sending clods of mud and grass flying
He arches his neck and rears, reminding you of King Aurthur's Black Charger.
The Stallion rears higher, towering over your small form, you are in awe of the power as the stallion's muscles ripple under his drum tight skin. His eyes are full of black flames, and he is the epitimy of a black warlock, so that's what you call him.
He prances to and fro, you watch his long wavy mane rise and fall as his crest rises and falls.
You reach out a hand to touch his muzzle, he calms down, and he acts like a puppy, folowing you where ever you go.
He kneels on his knees, and you mount him, sitting astride his broad, Black, muscled back. You grab a handful of his silky mane, and you tap his sides with your heels and urge him foreward. He gallops off, and you feel his powerful hindquarters collect under his body, then push him away.
You ride for ever, and he comes to a cliff and sprouts wings. You fly over the oceans, and over the clouds.
He takes you to the land of Black Pegasus, where he is king. You are to be his queen, as you feel yourself become a beautiful black mare, black as the night, You mane is long and flowing, your tail is long and thick. You are a compliment to him, as you both fly off into the setting sun, a chorous of neighs come up from the ground. You are one of them. |
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Please people, I find it an important notation to say what you think, please leave comments on my work! I like to see what people think!!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by DNR666 (2-28-2005 - 02:17 AM)
| It's different, i have never read anything like this before. it takes true creativity to write something such as this. great work. |
by (guest) (3-11-2005 - 05:25 AM)
| OY! Never have I read anything like that before. I especially loved the galloping part, Oh how I am soo wanting to ride a big black stallion now! |
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