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» Poem: Broken Love, and Broken Hearts.
Broken Love, and Broken Hearts.
written by devils angel 13
06:18 PM 12/31/04
I shield my eyes,
The sun is blocking my eyes,
New Jersey heat,
It's time to go...

There's no one to look back at,
No person to say goodbye to.
No time to look back on...
I walk and wish to go to the past.

Can't we just pretend...
That your feeling did just stay unchanged???
I slip into my car, and turn on the engine.
I silently go to the highway...

Where am I going?
What am I doing?
Can't you just still love me...
Can't we just make it work???

But I just need to forget...
Forget about you...and its hard.
Just memories left.
Memories of broken love.

Goodbye Jackson, New Jersey...
Too much shit has happened.


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» Comments / Feedback
by myheartxx (12-31-2004 - 06:57 PM)
Good one, I like the way you incorporate the highway as an escape from the state of mind the characters in.

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