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» Poem: Twist of fate...( murder...)
Twist of fate...( murder...)
written by Psychoace
10:40 PM 12/31/04
This is a tale....A very simple tale....

A woman a man

A simple life a simple death....

He cut himself....

She tried to make him stop

he couldn't or at least wouldn't...

Then one day she found him waiting for her...

He was crying not for his sins but for hers,

He had to tell her how he felt

and as he felt her soft dress and her repulsion....

He began to scream....

You made me do this he said as he tore into her flesh...

You made me do this to you...as he layed her to rest...

He pulled her delicate blue dress down further and further

As he held her.....murder.....murder...

it filled his mind on what to do he didn't want to but he couldn't control himself....

she slept on him so beautifully he quietly called murder.....murder....she looked to him with her warm eyes.....

She asked what was that my love...what did you say...

O nothing my love nothing (its time to play)

He moved his hand up her back...
sending shivers up her spine....

she then realized this was his twist of fate not hers..................

as he wraped her in there silk blankets he sadly called to her i'm sorry my love

Murder........murder.............


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» Comments / Feedback
by _Anything_to_be_Loved_ (12-31-2004 - 10:44 PM)
that was so beautiful. i feel so warm an fuzzy now ;)

by Psychoace (12-31-2004 - 11:10 PM)
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by xTroubledAngelxo (1-1-2005 - 06:21 AM)
Hey u left a comment on 1 of my poems and asked me 2 read urs. Hey dude i understand u. And this is a REALLY awsum poem i luv it! just look up my profile and stuff and u can email me or IM me or w/e kk

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