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Why do you love me?
written by Trapezium02:30 PM 1/1/05I always wonder what it is,
Exactly that you see in me,
Why is it then an angel like you,
Wants to waste her time with me?
I can never understand why,
You love it when I kiss you,
You could have someone so much better,
But I'm the one you choose.
I like to think I know you well,
But some things leave me clueless,
Like why you want to spend your days,
With a fool, a loser, a mess.
I'm just another ugly freak,
No one understands this monkey,
They all think that 'cause I take weed,
I'm just another happy junkie.
Scruffy hair, too many spots,
Black make up and eyes that chanfe,
Anti-establishment and voilent towards authority,
A little boy that wishes things would rearrange.
So why actually is it that,
You claim to love this crazy being,
What really is it that,
You see in him?
Could you describe your boyfreind,
In yet another poem,
He always wonders what you like aout him,
So please hun wont you show him.
I'm worthless, helpless, and useless.
Fat, ugly, and very much hated,
If god really did exist,
He'd despise the me he created.
Why do you love me,
I ask these questions yet I love you so much,
It seems so strange for this love to be mutual,
I love your voice, your eyes, your touch. |
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Wrote it last night
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| » Comments / Feedback | by forgottensinner (1-1-2005 - 04:43 PM)
| i feel where you a comin from, i like it keep it up |
by veganrockchick (1-1-2005 - 04:55 PM)
| its beautiful, your a really talented writer but in the line;
'With a fool, a loser, a mess' the rhythm is better substained by swapping loser and mess around :)
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by Cut_Wrist_Risk (1-1-2005 - 06:04 PM)
| Awesome poem, but unlike some people ^^^^^ I wont tell you how to change your poetry only you know how you want it to sound. I feel that way too sometimes, once I find sum one that likes ME enough. |
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